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Chapter 03 - School - Page 01
(Posted on: 21.03.2011, 04:14:05)
˙ƃuoɹʍ ǝɹɐ sƃuıʇʇǝs ɹoʇıuoɯ ɹnoʎ 'uʍop ǝpısdn sı ʇxǝʇ sıɥʇ ɟı - ʎɐʍ ǝɥʇ ʎq puɐ ¡sǝlqqnq ʍǝu ǝʌɐɥ ǝʍ ¡lol

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Posted on: 20.03.2011, 23:30:05
Darkhog  
Hiya!
For people who tried to reach MyCrossSoft Games over few past days see announcement above. I'll make announcements like this when I'll have something important to say.

Oh, by the way we have new page design. How do you like it?

AND DO NOT HOVER MOUSE OVER COMIC PAGE!

Next comic will be on 4th april

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Posted on: 21.03.2011, 13:37:40
Dragon-fan (Guest)  
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The new page design is looking good. The yellow/orange text at the top and bottom is a big improvment from the white. =)

But poor Albreth! At least he wasn't carrying Jack when he crashed. (But remember, show don't tell is a good rule of writing. An few exciting flying/crashing pages might have been good for the comic. Just something for you to consider)
Posted on: 21.03.2011, 14:19:00
Darkhog  
Okay
I might try something like this in future. How do you like new bubbles? There are pretty time-consuming to make but I think result is worth it. Probably will end up doing some kind of speechbubble database from which I'll just copy paste if size/color fit.
Posted on: 22.03.2011, 12:13:37
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Yes, the new speech bubbles are a nice colour and the database is a good idea if they cost a lot of time!
But the way the bubbles trail out of the characters mouth, that part could be shortened to a smaller point, I feel. Just long enough to point out who is talking.
Also, in panel 3 Jack's speech bubbles could be joined together by a small line in the centre. (I've seen it done many times in other comics) Both these things could save a lot of room in the panels and would make them feel a bit tidier.

Keep up the good work!! =)
All the improvments are really good so far and it looks like your art has improved again :)
Posted on: 23.03.2011, 04:44:21
Darkhog  
Thanks!
Better I'll start working on next page then.
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